Date: 2009-07-24 01:54 am (UTC)
I don't even know where to begin commenting today! Hm, I guess the black rain first. Those birds really are frightening. They tempted other spirits away and made them die? Chunks of the forest dies with them too?! Does this mean that each spirit looks after sections of the forest? Oi. I really hope they can defeat those death birds because... Zhou Mi in Kyuhyun's world seems a bit odd to me. A little... depressing.

They shared such a meaningful kiss and now they can communicate! UGH. That made me so happy. You've answers so many of my questions in such an amazing way. Zhou Mi feeds off beauty and Kyu's touch! That's so perfect.

Oh, btw, I LOVED the spider scene. On that note, I also really like how you remind us that Zhou Mi isn't completely immortal. That he does have weaknesses. That's so important to realize... but it's also making me a little scared. His amulet! I really hope nothing happens to it.

THE ENDING. AHHH! What a way to end a chapter. My fear just increased tenfold. D:

I'll stop rambling now. D:
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