I really like Henry's character in this ♥ ..full of angelic goodness. Also, imagining him ride Zhu was so nice. I'm so glad you picked him over other members! :Dhow h
As always, your characterization is my favourite. I enjoy seeing Kyuhyun's insecurity and how he doesn't let his true feelings for Zhou Mi show, or how he is unable to comprehend them himself because he's afraid of getting hurt. Wait, that sounds mean, lol.
It was sad to see them lying to each other before Zhou Mi left though, with both of them thinking one thing, but saying and acting the opposite way :( babies.. they hurt each other over something ridiculous. But the desperate not-meant-to-be-goodbye sex was amazing ♥ uhuh.
The webcam mini-dates, all that flirting, so cute.. ;~~~~~; so precious, and the scene where Kyuhyun shows Zhou Mi pictures and videos of Zhu is so sweet, I got teary-eyed like the crybaby I am \o/ eh. Another precious moment is when Zhou Mi falls asleep on the ride back home after the competition.. want to cuddle him. But I especially like the scene with Zhou Mi meeting Zhu for the first time since he left ;A; sweet ♥
.......Kyuhyun / Fried Chicken second pairing anyone? orz so cute. It made me crave for fried chicken so much :| I'm blaming yoooou.
"Zhou Mi found ways to reach and pat his butt even if they were riding together" This. THIS. Can we blame Zhou Mi? :| Such delicious butt in front of his own eyes.. /grabby hands.
As always, pleasantly entertained by your story ♥ hope your writing will accompany me through this boring Summer. I never told you, but I was hoping you'd write a fic with horses some day ^^ knowing your passion.
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Date: 2011-06-24 10:56 pm (UTC)As always, your characterization is my favourite. I enjoy seeing Kyuhyun's insecurity and how he doesn't let his true feelings for Zhou Mi show, or how he is unable to comprehend them himself because he's afraid of getting hurt. Wait, that sounds mean, lol.
It was sad to see them lying to each other before Zhou Mi left though, with both of them thinking one thing, but saying and acting the opposite way :( babies.. they hurt each other over something ridiculous. But the desperate not-meant-to-be-goodbye sex was amazing ♥ uhuh.
The webcam mini-dates, all that flirting, so cute.. ;~~~~~; so precious, and the scene where Kyuhyun shows Zhou Mi pictures and videos of Zhu is so sweet, I got teary-eyed like the crybaby I am \o/ eh. Another precious moment is when Zhou Mi falls asleep on the ride back home after the competition.. want to cuddle him. But I especially like the scene with Zhou Mi meeting Zhu for the first time since he left ;A; sweet ♥
.......Kyuhyun / Fried Chicken second pairing anyone? orz so cute. It made me crave for fried chicken so much :| I'm blaming yoooou.
"Zhou Mi found ways to reach and pat his butt even if they were riding together" This. THIS. Can we blame Zhou Mi? :| Such delicious butt in front of his own eyes.. /grabby hands.
As always, pleasantly entertained by your story ♥ hope your writing will accompany me through this boring Summer. I never told you, but I was hoping you'd write a fic with horses some day ^^ knowing your passion.