Date: 2011-01-06 01:26 am (UTC)
This was exquisite and touching and as sexy as the first one but without as much gut wrenching worry and the desire to punch Kyu in the face.

"Who died and made you first base?" he heard, opening his lazy eyes to see Kyuhyun peering down at them.

"I thought you did," he answered, smiling." A piece of dialogue that is a perfect example of how well you understand the dynamic between your two characters who happen to be the incredibly sexy mi and kyu but I think you could write about anybody and it would be great. Thanks for letting us back into this au!
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