omg, that was amazing, so sorry that i haven't posted on any of the other chaps, but i felt like i had to save it 'till the end.
every about this story was wonderful, how you showed the character development through the 8 chapters, how Kyuhyun evolved as a person, and how Zhou Mi fought with his insecurities about his relationship with him..
and the way you wrote the intimate scenes made the story really something. it wasn't rushed like " o.k a quick fuck and we're done" but it wasn't dragged on and on like " he did this, he said this, he did this while he did this.." do you get it? it wasn't like if i read to fast i would've missed it, and it wasn't paragraphs long, it was just the right amount of description.
and just GOSH! i loved every single chapter, took me 3 days to finished. mind you i only has an 2hrs each day, but i managed. and i can't believe i just discovered it, right when you posted your last chapter, but if i had seen it sooner i would've been jumping off the seat of my chair checking everyday if you'd updated.
kyuhyun's daughter was just to precious, how innocent she is and how she attacked "Zhou Mimi" when he came back. that moment made my throat close up, i really could've have cried.
o.k well that was a lot, and i could probably ramble on and on about why your story was so GREAT, but i think I've said enough.
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Date: 2009-10-17 01:57 am (UTC)every about this story was wonderful, how you showed the character development through the 8 chapters, how Kyuhyun evolved as a person, and how Zhou Mi fought with his insecurities about his relationship with him..
and the way you wrote the intimate scenes made the story really something. it wasn't rushed like " o.k a quick fuck and we're done" but it wasn't dragged on and on like " he did this, he said this, he did this while he did this.." do you get it? it wasn't like if i read to fast i would've missed it, and it wasn't paragraphs long, it was just the right amount of description.
and just GOSH! i loved every single chapter, took me 3 days to finished. mind you i only has an 2hrs each day, but i managed. and i can't believe i just discovered it, right when you posted your last chapter, but if i had seen it sooner i would've been jumping off the seat of my chair checking everyday if you'd updated.
kyuhyun's daughter was just to precious, how innocent she is and how she attacked "Zhou Mimi" when he came back. that moment made my throat close up, i really could've have cried.
o.k well that was a lot, and i could probably ramble on and on about why your story was so GREAT, but i think I've said enough.
i think I'll go fic stalk you know ^>^