http://anita-dee.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] anita-dee.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] coley_merrin 2015-02-08 09:43 pm (UTC)

ACK OK
sorry it took me so long to come back to this.

First of all OMG THANK YOU for writing this. It's not at all what I imagined but that makes it absolutely and completely so /much/ /better/.
Secondly, the way Joonmyun was the one who chose Jongin in the end...that sort of equality to an abo relationship...I loved it so much. And the simple childhood background and how their younger personalities lent to their current ones /breathes heavily. I seriously loved this thank you thank you- that's all I can say!

“Dream of that, then,” Jongin told him, and felt strangely humbled by Joonmyun’s trust in him. He wanted to lead like that, to be that person for all his pack. He resolved to be, that night, listening to the rain.

This was my favorite quote. Simply beautiful. <3

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