http://amaxingbaek.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] amaxingbaek.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] coley_merrin 2015-01-27 07:15 am (UTC)

Ahh I don't...know what to say, I'm in such awe. It's such a different take on the a/b/o universe and I'm enamored by it. The fact that the knot isn't the end, but something along the way to the end, something that is so much more than just staking a claim is <3 I don't know what it is, but this world is just so...magical, like a whole new world has opened up before me. I really love how there's consent, because things like that get difficult in verses like this, especially when there's an omega involved, and aroused no less. So let me just, spit stuff back out at you.

Oh, his voice went a bit breathy, as Sehun nearly leaned into him.
Joonmyun already caught up in Sehun from the start <3 I just fully realized the height dynamics of this and wept a little, just thinking about the hugs and kisses and the backing up against doors, how Sehun would have to bend down and apghoajonowhwor TOO MUCH FOR ME.

Sehun pressed his lips together. “It just smells… It’s like you’re asking for someone.”

Joonmyun had heard it in all sorts of ways, that he smelled like he was begging to be fucked, that he was ready to kneel. He’d heard it crass, and careful, and wry, and none of those statements had quite the weight of Sehun’s.

I like this. Like you said, it's not entirely crude, like he was begging, but more...toned-down in a way? That's not really what I was looking for, but it's going to have to do because I can't really explain it :/ But like..."Like you're asking" it's just so...pro-choice that I love it.

To kiss him and not just his mouth, to enjoy the subtlety of the kiss instead of using it as a substitute for what he wanted to do to Joonmyun’s body.
Ahhh I'm so in love with the little details, how their kisses weren't bruising or rushed or painful, but soft, slow, meaningful other than to get a good fuck.

But there was Sehun, rumpled and a bit sleepy eyed, and he couldn’t resist bending down and kissing Sehun’s mouth.
SLEEPY, CUDDLY SEHUN IS MY FAVORITE, DAMN IT.

“92%. A solid compatibility though not the highest I’ve seen by far.”
Did you hear that? It was the sound of my heart ripping away from what's keeping it in my chest, flung out the window, and run over by a lawnmower. I can't handle this, it's too much for my weak heart T.T

If his knees gave a little, it didn’t matter, because Sehun’s arms were holding him up.
THE-!! I don't know if it was supposed to be taken this way, but I took it as, well, physical support, but also general support, that Sehun would be there when Joonmyun needed him to be, holding him up and keeping him happy when he fell.

“Is it me?” Sehun wondered. Could it be.

“Yes. Please,” he said, and gasped when Sehun lifted him. “Please.”

YES! Could it be...my heart T.T My poor, poor heart.

I don't know what else to say because I've been reduced to a potato, but this was gorgeous. I've already said it, but I love the take on this world, choice being so relevant throughout and Sehun accepting that there are boundaries, and Joonmyun listening to his heart in the end. Thank you for writing this, really <3

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