There's something about your writing that's so addicting. The hilarious lines, “Am I going to make it till the clothes come off?” he wondered out loud", just cinch it. XD
It's really nice to see that the cross-dressing issue never became a really big issue, nor central to the story itself. It was everything else, the flirty setting, the transformation into their work hours, the tension between the two, that became much more important than the clothes they wore to work. Instead, it focused on Zhou Mi and Kyuhyun taking that leap of faith, to open up to one another. And goodness, I had no idea there were so many ways to drop giant hints and for your target to rationalize away their attraction for you. LOL. Kyuhyun, you are ridiculous :3 Really, you did an excellent job with all the thoughtful setting work you did in chapter two.
I also really liked the chapter where Kyuhyun goes and hangs out with Ryeowook and the other guys. Ryeowook, gentle speaker, telling him to man up! AAHAHAHA. XD And what's kind of refreshing about this story is that they learn about each other, little by little, in unexpected moments. Like when Kyuhyun learns that Zhou Mi tops/had topped before during that "best thing about x" game. XD XD
This ending is so much better than what my imagination came up with. A puppy, Kyuhyun finds work elsewhere, they get busy while dressed as women (tbh, I didn't see that coming /stupid), and of course, they're finally together :))!!!! There's such a sense of symmetry and satisfaction at the end.
Thanks for all your hard work. Reading this story every other day or so cheered me up a lot. :))
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It's really nice to see that the cross-dressing issue never became a really big issue, nor central to the story itself. It was everything else, the flirty setting, the transformation into their work hours, the tension between the two, that became much more important than the clothes they wore to work. Instead, it focused on Zhou Mi and Kyuhyun taking that leap of faith, to open up to one another. And goodness, I had no idea there were so many ways to drop giant hints and for your target to rationalize away their attraction for you. LOL. Kyuhyun, you are ridiculous :3 Really, you did an excellent job with all the thoughtful setting work you did in chapter two.
I also really liked the chapter where Kyuhyun goes and hangs out with Ryeowook and the other guys. Ryeowook, gentle speaker, telling him to man up! AAHAHAHA. XD And what's kind of refreshing about this story is that they learn about each other, little by little, in unexpected moments. Like when Kyuhyun learns that Zhou Mi tops/had topped before during that "best thing about x" game. XD XD
This ending is so much better than what my imagination came up with. A puppy, Kyuhyun finds work elsewhere, they get busy while dressed as women (tbh, I didn't see that coming /stupid), and of course, they're finally together :))!!!! There's such a sense of symmetry and satisfaction at the end.
Thanks for all your hard work. Reading this story every other day or so cheered me up a lot. :))