ext_114001 ([identity profile] todefinebeauty.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] coley_merrin 2010-04-18 04:03 am (UTC)

So I read all the previous 9 chapters in one night and was so stunned (in the absolutely fantastic way!!) that I really couldn't formulate a coherent comment at all in response haha. But since I've had some time for it to sink in, I just want to say that this is amazing - your writing is so engaging and I am probably a bit biased, but the blohyuk storyline was SO well done and it really made me feel so... haha. *still doesn't have too much coherence* Like, every time they were in the same room and interacting had me just WISHING that they would get it together while at the same time, a little part of me hoped that that sexual tension would last forever. Because omg, it was SO perfect and tense between them in the earlier chapters and okay, ridiculously hot whenever anything happened (which it did ;___; often ;___; and it made me so happy!). I feel like - that progression of their relationship worked so well for this length of a fic and made the most of it, too, in a way that could have been good in a one-shot, but was amazing and developed brilliantly here. And when they did get together properly, it was like I felt it, you know? Like just - finally ♥ ♥ ♥!!! sighs~

Basically after I finished all 9 chapters I just wanted to go back to the beginning and reread it all over again, that backstory and build up of tension and resolution and alkdfjsdlkfj really I was keysmashing all over the place reading this 8DDD (Kei can vouch for this hahaha)

Aside from the blohyuk, though, I really enjoyed the HenHae as well! Which was sort of surprising (I don't really have any opinion on the pairing normally) but awesome, haha. Donghae made me so ;__; in the beginning with how he was acting, but you wrote them so well... I wish I could find a better way to say that lol but thank you so much for writing such a great fic! I enjoyed reading this a LOT and I'm so glad Kei linked me to this~ since I don't check miracle anymore. :DDDDD and the end of the last chapter had me D:!!!!-ing all over the place but YAY they made it out aliveeeeee :)!

Anticipating the final chapter~ ♥ :D

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