http://jarield.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jarield.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] coley_merrin 2010-04-11 09:26 am (UTC)

The Review

I had read a majority of your stuffs. And I musts say, so far, this is my favorite of all the fics you had written. I’m always such a sucker with second chance theme stories. The hidden emotions, the longing and yearning, the rationality versus the emotions; these are all the things that makes this story fantastic. Oh, not to mention with all the hot crime setting. Love the little touch of darkness. All I could say, typically yaoi…
Read this for amazing HenHae as always. But Tablo and Eunhyuk are also as adorable. They are just adorable! Gosh, why can’t they make out already? I will surely looking out how their relationship will develop in the future chapters.
There are many reasons why I cannot help but love this fic. But I think the characterization is what truly stood out for me. An innocent HenHae in “For Always” is such a beauty. But the dark HenHae in this fic is more tempting to not ignore. And I think it is the shift in character/s that gives the story and more dynamic mood. I love the concept of maturity; growing old; and realizing that things were not the same anymore. The idea of young love being replaced by desperation, passion and darkness is just too much.
The lively childish Donghae is just adorable, much with the baby-like innocent Henry. But I must say, I prefer the reserved, dark, and manly Hae with his naughty acts and dominating persona. It makes me squeal like a crazy fan girl imagining him. Although Henry appears to be the uke among the two; I love the spunk in his character. He’s not as dark as Hae, but I could still tell he is man despite that. Oh gosh, such a lovely pair.
So, more power to this story of yours…

One more thing, I couldn’t promise you if I could give reviews in some of your fics because I may be too lazy to type. But just want to let you know that all of them are great. So whatever you are doing, just keep on doing it. Just want to let you know that there are people like whom you made smile every time you do an update or post a new project.

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