The fact that you're posting this means you're finished, right? :D :D

Oh god, Jen, this is so creative and aslkdjfs you wrote the chilling, uncertain atmosphere so well. And Kyuhyun's "dream" with all these natives, these people with not-quite faces...it's creepy and foreign and awesome.

And the end is just mmmmmmm sensuous. I have been craving Qmi like crazy lately. ♥ Cannot wait until the next part!