But you know, despite his denseness, I really like your characterization for all of the guys, especially Kyuhyun. I find your owl-puppy comparison to be incredibly apt for the QMi dynamic you've set up, and even though the way SiHan dances around each other drives me mad, it's realistic and makes for entertaining reading.
I also love that this isn't just a romantic comedy/drama, that there's actually a plot. I'm kind of at the edge of my seat in anticipation to what'll happen next in terms of the bookstore.
Excellent job thus far, can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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But you know, despite his denseness, I really like your characterization for all of the guys, especially Kyuhyun. I find your owl-puppy comparison to be incredibly apt for the QMi dynamic you've set up, and even though the way SiHan dances around each other drives me mad, it's realistic and makes for entertaining reading.
I also love that this isn't just a romantic comedy/drama, that there's actually a plot. I'm kind of at the edge of my seat in anticipation to what'll happen next in terms of the bookstore.
Excellent job thus far, can't wait for the next chapter! :D